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The guy seriously needs an editor. The first paragraph is more of a cliche

Fagget Mijinga kïpiiiiii kinene zaidi mumama zaidiiiii umekaaa hivi fuaaaaaa ukihara ukinyamba ukidunga ukinusa uvundo ukakuambia wewe na muhahe yooooooooote ya watu wenyu wewe ndiwe wa kwanza na hii stale news? Brare taktaka ghaseer imbilisi nyeusi cunt

Kwani ni composition ya high school

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Fungua chatgpt, paraphrase everything apa in a satirical manner and watch the magic

I’m curious… I get the cliche part, but what would you/should change besides duplications & punctuations and grammar kidogo ? Writing should immerse the reader’s mind & imagination into the writer’s mind & environment which the first paragraph does well…ama?

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