back in those days when I was a fisi in the making I had this neighbours daughter her name was Yvonne. her dad was a business man and they lived in a posh estate in Molo kila esto ya mabolla hakukosagi ghetto .the girl was hot n tulkua tumemeet kawaida manifesto ya fisi hupeanwa right way.I used to visit her when her dad was away secretly. sato fulani all odds had conspired to make my day hectic then I got her call Des my dad us on a business trip till weno would you come over. mmi huyo pap nmetokea kama ambulance adi kwao. Got a warm welcome then kamovie kiasi n stroking mode. the day was fine till evening mmi nmeekelea mighty kwa meza n.a. remote kwa mkono and her by my side door ikafunguliwa all of a sudden his dad got in. acha niende hivi nakam
Desmond wewe! Tutasema mara ngapi bila sketch ama picha hapa the next worse thing you can do is not finish a poorly written hekaya!?
Mavi ya kuku …brare fuacking chieth.
am back. all of a sudden his dad opened the door and on direct eye contact the next step nlikua nmerukia window facing kwa barabara I ran towards the gate n I thought i was out of danger zone. his dad thought i was a thief and raised alarm with all neighbours getting out of their gates armed i ran towards the mainroad only to find a mob waiting for me turning backwards another was baying for my blood .in a minute of confusion I got a blow that threw me to the ground all I could feel was a rythm of pain as they took turns hitting me. all that was in mind was thinking how terrible my life had been and I didn’t know whether to be happy or sad coz it was going to be an end just like the curtain raiser shows in a theatre. back to my death bed I was bleeding and feeling weak then one guy proposed a tyre to burn me but in the commotion of arguing Yvonne screamed and said I was her guest it took time to convince them as other blood hungry monsters continued the beating me her dad wasn’t convinced but I had to be taken to hospital in minutes I was unconscious after an hour i woke up in a hospital bed with sharp pain and Yvonne came in after being alert by the nurse i didn’t know if i should thank her for saving my life or she is the one who ruined it anyway ladies and gentlemen thats how i got my deep scars at my back and withdrew from Mafisi party to become an independent candidate. … new hekaya happy to join the family
hekaya poa lakini kwanini part one ulikuwa umeandika kama mto…villagers watakuonyesha pa kukaa…
Not bad but you will not get my like.
Note: @Cool Ruler hekaya nusu nusu uache
Poor very poorly written
Combine the two lakini Sielewi why you split it into 2 .
Uliona heri mob kushinda kuface mzee? Hata kama mzee angekupea kichapo of the year, you would have gained your lady’s respect
One veeeery long sentence. If only you could slow down…uko na hekaya moto. Lay down another hekaya and I will come back here and give you two likes…
the running instinct is normally instantaneous…mtu huja kuona hungetoroka when very far and when commonsense tells you that you’ve left the object of your desire in peril- like having to answer why you ran away if there was nothing wrong you were doing…
My grandpa (God Rest His Soul) had a very simple question: Ukuraga niki? (why were you running away) whenever we Shekha Mehtad from a situation.
…mighty kwa meza n.a. remote kwa mkono and HER by my side door ikafunguliwa all of a sudden HIS DAD got in. acha niende hivi nakam
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Are you straight?
Shida ni ati umekalia kiti cha mzee na ukawekelea mguu juu ya meza yake… alafu ukafikiria pia mschana wake…wacha tu akimbie…hilo ni swali halina majibu!
Alafu kwani hio hekaya ya pili imemalysia!?
‘his dad’ ? Brare Faggot.
Gay
Badala ya kufikisha threshold wewe na ujinga wako ni kubadilisha channels kwa TV, sadness of being a NV.
How do I get over this? A nice story poorly narrated