JIKONI NILIRUDI CHECK OUT THE PROGRESS

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sW8MC6QsU10

Upuus

Buda. Your rapping style still lacks cadence. Ni Kama unasoma Kitabu. Unasomea watoi storybook. Still very monotonic. Try and rap like unagombana na dame wako. That increases authority in your deliverance.

Take it easy on the boy. He has to start from somewhere. That’s his style, but he does need to switch it up and pack a punch to it. @the butcher254 also try get another mic. Mixing could also be better. Basically, try get a better studio. All the best!

Tulishaongea btw. I told him to rap with authority. Kama hedi anagombeza pupil. Hapa ni ka anaogopa. No control of his skill.

Sitakuficha nanii lakini nimekuwa nikilenga posts zako. Your shit is actually fire mtu wangu.

Endelea tu na vile wasee wamesema hapo juu, try and stomp your authority.

Maral thanks

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Buda. Your rapping style still lacks cadence. Ni Kama unasoma Kitabu. Unasomea watoi storybook. Still very monotonic. Try and rap like unagombana na dame wako. That increases authority in your deliverance.
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Thanks G

Dope beat, more of the instrumentals please.